Shayne O'Connor a ?crit : > hi all > > i've just finished re-recording a track i linked to the list a few weeks > ago ... i've tried incorporating some suggestions, and most importantly > - i think my guitar is in tune! > > http://www.machinehasnoagenda.com/downloads/the_girls_-_the_sailor_(final).ogg > > i think it sounds heaps better than the previous version, but it doesn't > really matter in any case, as it is more just one of a few tracks i'm > throwing together for a band i'm trying to get happening ... > > but if anyone still wants to try their hand at mixing this song, just > let me know and i'll see if i can pack up the tracks into a torrent file. > > should have my next one up soon. > > shayne > Hi shayne Nice song but as james said I think you can improved your mix again. Global impressions : - the drums are to much in the background for my taste. - the beginning of the song is a little muddy, the combinaison of the vocal, background vocal and rythm guitar is maybe a little to much in the mid-low mid range, things become much more clear after 1:20. What I would try : - A little more drum - A little less rythm guitar before 1:20 or maybe just less low-mid on this track - Something can be done also on the background vocal before 1:20, after they are fine but before they are maybe to much present. Just my 2 ? cents ;-) Christophe
