Hey Diego!
Nice tune! I like how the mix starts, but later on it feels like it's either clipping or overcompressed. I would also really mind hihat and percussion levels, a lot of them might sound better if they are quieter, so that the beat feels more together. As a rule, I make hihats really-really quiet, this is one of the major tips of writing techno. Usually you reduce the loudness of the hiahat to 0 and then increase its loudness until you can make it out, but not louder than that.
I would also reduce the lows on most of the elements, by about 1.38 when the claps starts it becomes really crowded. I like the string at 6.20, very clean, but the mix itself is not breathing at this point and feels a bit flat, whereas I want to feel the dynamics and the groove. And what's interesting, the mix itself sound relatively clean, so a bit more dynamics could really make it awesome.
Cheers!
Louigi Verona
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On Fri, May 1, 2020 at 11:26 PM Diego Simak <diego.simak@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
_______________________________________________El vie., 1 may. 2020 a las 14:02, Jeanette C. (<julien@xxxxxxxxxxx>) escribió:May 1 2020, Diego Simak has written:
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> https://soundcloud.com/diegosimak/tm-2020-05-01t125331
This sounds very electro nightclubby. I could imagine the kicks pumping
out a big PA. It also shows a non too often exposed side of Yoshimi. I
think I'd love to hear that in a Berlin underground club. :)
Best wishes,
Jeanette
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(Britney Spears)Hey Jeanette!Thank you very much for listening.Yeah, I would love to ear it in a underground club too.Best wishes,Diego
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