Austin wrote: >On Mon, 2004-12-06 at 18:49 -0600, Reuben Martin wrote: > > >>http://students.jbu.edu/martinr/JW_Demo.ogg >> >> > >Wow. That's a great track, and it sounds very decent. > >Here's a song Joey and I have been working on for a while. It's not >finished, so I'd love comments. > >We recorded the audio with Audacity and a Quattro, but Joey imported it >all into Cubase for mixing and mastering. The realtime effects are >pretty handy I must admit. Maybe we will master with Jamin. I dunno. >He's pretty windowcentric. > >http://groundstate.ca/bulk/jasmine_mix8.mp3 > >Quite a bit more polished than, say, Two Point Six. ;-) > >(BTW, still hoping to put up a site listing made-with-linux songs, but >my stupid CMS is not cooperating.) > >Austin > > > > Nice tune. Interesting structure and nice guitar. I like the finger picking as it is a favorite thing of mine. The acoustic sounds like it was detuned and slightly out or used a capo? Or out with the piano...something sounds just a sqeak off there... I'm a less is more kinda guy...I'd keep the guitar and sink the piano way back in the mix...even replace with some strings? Nice fx on the slide work...I know you said the mix is rough...On my cheapy monitors it sounds a bit muddy between 300hz and 1k. Good piece.