On 08/18/2016 02:47 PM, Dave Young wrote: > On 08/17/16 at 07:36pm, Joe Perches wrote: >> On Thu, 2016-08-18 at 10:31 +0800, Zhou Wenjian wrote: >>> nr_cpus can help to save memory. So we should remind user of it. >> >> trivia: >>> diff --git a/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt b/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt >> [] >>> @@ -390,9 +390,11 @@ Notes on loading the dump-capture kernel: >>> * Boot parameter "1" boots the dump-capture kernel into single-user >>> mode without networking. If you want networking, use "3". >>> >>> -* We generally don' have to bring up a SMP kernel just to capture the >>> +* We generally don' have to bring up an SMP kernel just to capture the >> >> don't or do not >> > > Use do not is better, also need replace 'We' with 'You' to be > consistent with other part. > > I think it's better to fix it in another patch, for it doesn't have much relevance to the patch set. I'll post it alone later. -- Thanks Zhou
