Thank you very much Gonzalo,
I will use your review when entering my IESG ballot later today. Having a directorate review really helps the AD job ;-)
Regards
-éric
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Reply-To: "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Monday, 2 March 2020 at 20:49
To: "iot-directorate@xxxxxxxx" <iot-directorate@xxxxxxxx>
Cc: "last-call@xxxxxxxx" <last-call@xxxxxxxx>, "draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea.all@xxxxxxxx" <draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea.all@xxxxxxxx>, "ecrit@xxxxxxxx" <ecrit@xxxxxxxx>
Subject: [Last-Call] Iotdir telechat review of draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21
Reviewer: Gonzalo Salgueiro
Review result: Ready with Nits
Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea-21
Review result: Ready with Nits
Review type: iotdir - Last Call review
Requested version for review: Current
Review Date: 2020-03-02
Reviewer: Gonzalo Salgueiro
I am the assigned IoT directorate reviewer for <draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea>.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just
like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve
them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more
details on the IoT Directorate, see
https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/iotdir/about/
This document describes (1) how method of including a CAP message in a SIP
transaction by defining it as a block of "additional data" as well as (2)
describes how a SIP MESSAGE transaction can be used to send a non-interactive
call. I have reviewed this document from the IoT perspective and the document
appears to be informative, clear and without obvious technical gaps. There are
just a few the authors might consider addressing.
Nits:
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S: Abstract
"type of interactions" -> "types of interactions"
S:1
"alert specific" -> "alert-specific"
S:9
"Location specific" -> "Location-specific"
S:9
"Note that none of the security mechanism in this document" -> "Note that none
of the security mechanisms in this document"
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