Thank you for the OPS DIR review, Mehmet. Joe > On Feb 18, 2020, at 11:56, Mehmet Ersue via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Mehmet Ersue > Review result: Has Nits > > I reviewed the document "Secure Device Install (draft-ietf-opsawg-sdi-03) as > part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF > documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily > for the benefit of the operational area directors. Document editors and WG > chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. > > Intended status: Informational > Current IESG state: I-D Exists > IANA State: N/A > > Summary: > The document extends existing auto-install / Zero-Touch Provisioning mechanisms > to make the process more secure. > > There are no relevant draft nits in the document. > > Though there are a few typos, etc. > s/There are also a/There is also a/ > s/an auto-install techniques/an auto-install technique/ > s/etc;/etc.;/ > 5x s/e.g/e.g./ > s/operations is/operations are/ > > As far as I can see the document has been repeatedly improved and is in good > shape. I don't see any big issues related to management preventing from > publication. > > Cheers, > Mehmet > > _______________________________________________ > OPS-DIR mailing list > OPS-DIR@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ops-dir -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
