Thanks for the review, Tianran On 2/10/2020 12:39 AM, Tianran Zhou via Datatracker wrote: > Reviewer: Tianran Zhou > Review result: Ready > > I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing > effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These > comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of > the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included > in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should > treat these comments just like any other last call comments. > > In general, this document is clear to me. I did not see any special operational > or network management related issue. The problems and requirements are well > discussed in this informational document. > > There are some obvious nits. For example, the number of the items in section > 4.1 and 4.2. > > -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
