Reviewer: Vincent Roca Review result: Has Nits Hello, I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Summary: Ready with nits The security considerations section is globally well writen and addresses important topics. I don't have major comments. Details: - it is said that "(i.e., config true, which is the default)". I've searched in the YANG model and only found "config false" entries which seems to contradict what is said in section 5. - Section 2.1 says: "This model can be used to configure and manage MSDP protocols." (with a final "s") which suggests there could be several MSDP protocols. I think it's a mistake. Cheers, Vincent -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
