RFC8349 says that a new identity MUST be defined for a new control plane protocol - I see no such definition here RFC8349 says that augments should be to control-plane-protocols/control-plane-protocol as is seen in the OSPF and the other LSR YANG modules; here I see an augment to control-plane-protocols which seems wrong to me many features but no idea where to look them up - I think every YANG feature needs a YANG reference to an I-D/RFC I find a list of features and references in the body of an I-D valuable YANG modules must be plain text; [3618] in the module description does not look like plain text. Other references e.g. RFC8177 look ok although some have a space in them and some do not leaf tcp-connection-source says that ipv4 must be enabled but the when statement does not test for enabled, just for configured rpc clear peer clears everything if there is no address - this is fail danger, a specific value for clear all would IMHO be better engineering XXXX is likely to mean this I-D/RFC but I always like to see a specific direction to the RFC Editor to that effect, just the once, somewhere near the front. In the same vein, a direction to replace the dates with date of publication would not go amiss Tom Petch ________________________________________ From: IETF-Announce <ietf-announce-bounces@xxxxxxxx> on behalf of The IESG <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> Sent: 15 January 2020 20:29 To: IETF-Announce Cc: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang@xxxxxxxx; pim-chairs@xxxxxxxx; pim@xxxxxxxx Subject: Last Call: <draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-08.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP)) to Proposed Standard The IESG has received a request from the Protocols for IP Multicast WG (pim) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP)' <draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-08.txt> as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2020-01-30. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration and management of Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP) Protocol. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang/ IESG discussion can be tracked via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang/ballot/ No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. _______________________________________________ IETF-Announce mailing list IETF-Announce@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf-announce -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
