Reviewer: Rich Salz Review result: Has Nits This is the security directorate (secdir) review for the sipcore-locparam draft. Secdir tries to review all documents. The primary intended recipient of this review if the security AD's; all others should consider this to be like any other last-call review. Summary: ready with nits. End of Sec 1 has a quote-based typo. In Sec 3, "This document does not comment..." paragraph is a beautiful acceptance of reality. In Sec 6, do proxies normally add themselves to the Record-Route field? If so, that might be worth mentioning explicitly. In Sec 7, looks good. A couple of typo's "multiple*S* locations" and "hop-<SPACE>by-hop" and "an<SPACE>other domain." -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
