Dear David: Thanks for addressing my comments. Regarding not being able to see long lines as I report below, please see the attached screenshot corresponding to the "htmlized" version of the draft.
Cheers,
- vijay
On Thu, Jan 2, 2020 at 9:29 AM David Noveck <davenoveck@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
On Tue, Dec 17, 2019 at 7:17 PM Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-??
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2019-12-17
IETF LC End Date: 2019-11-25
IESG Telechat date: 2019-12-19
I have reviewed about 1/2 of the I-D, up to Section 12 (page 297). I will
review the remaining 1/2 before the telchat, but I suspect that given my very
high level overview of the draft, my disposition will not change.
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. In the
portion of the draft I reviewed, there are some minor nits that can easily be
fixed.
Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 0
Nits/editorial comments: 4 ("Sn" means Section n):
1/ Appendix A: s/No correesponding explanation/No corresponding explanation/Fixed.2/ S1: s/authoritative complete/authoritatively complete/I went with "authoritative and complete"3/ S1.7 (page 12): "associable" or "associated to"Went with "can be associated with".4/ There are many long lines that go beyond 80 characters, see S1.9, the bullet
that starts with “o Open files can be …”,I don't see sny long lines here, either in the .txt or .xml.Table 1,Here the .txt is OK but the .xml has long line. WIll clean up to make futureediting of the .xml easier.S4.2.1, etc.I don't see sny long lines here, either in the .txt or .xml.
Thanks,
- vijay
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