Peter, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Nov 9, 2019, at 12:28 PM, Peter Yee via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-thaler-iftype-reg-06 > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review Date: 2019-11-09 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-11-07 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This is a well-written draft that provides updated guidance for the > IANA interface and tunnel type registries. It was a pleasure to read: when a > question arose in my mind, I invariably found it answered in the next > paragraph. The reasoning for the guidance given is well explained and clear. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Page 3, Section 3, item #2, 1st sentence: Delete the first two commas. > > Page 3, Section 3, item #3, 1st sentence: Delete the first two commas. > > Page 7, Section 6.1, item #3, 2nd sentence: Delete the last comma. > > Page 7, Section 6.1, item #4: Delete the space between iftype and the period. > > Page 8, 3rd paragraph, Rationale (2): Change "transmision" to "transmission". > > Page 10, 3rd bullet item: I suspect "xxxSomeTunnelTypeLabel" would make more > sense here than "xxxSomeIfTypeLabel". > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
