Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mboned-driad-amt-discovery-09 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 2019-11-28 IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready with a couple of nits / editorial clarifications. This document updates Automatic Multicast Tunneling (AMT) defined by RFC 7450 by defining DNS Reverse IP AMT Discovery (DRIAD), an extension of the relay discovery process to use a new DNS resource record named AMTRELAY when discovering AMT relays for source-specific multicast channels. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. The reading of 2.4.1 and 2.4.3 seemed to me confusing. 2.4.1 speaks about 'establishing' a connection while 2.4.3 speaks about 'completing' a connection. Are the two terms equivalent? If so, I would prefer to use only one of them, if not, some more clarification is necessary. 2. The term 'tier 3 ISP' used in Section 3.1.1 is an 'industry term' that needs to be defined, either by reference or in text. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
