seeing if I can switch from ietf to Last Call
inline
Tom Petch
----- Original Message -----
From: "Michael Richardson" <mcr+ietf@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Monday, October 28, 2019 10:06 PM
> tom petch <daedulus@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> > Looking some more at this I-D, I have more concerns about the
YANG
> > module. My review is informal - I recommend that the WG Chair
request a
> > formal review because I may be missing something particularly in
> > connection with the 'refine' statements.
>
> > The I-D has namespace
> > "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-voucher-request"; prefix
"vch";
> > whereas RFC8366, which it augments, has namespace
> > "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-voucher"; prefix vch;
Different
> > module, same prefix; this contradicts a SHOULD NOT in RFC8407.
>
> okay, so I shoudl change it to "vcr" for VouCher Request then?
> I think that this will have affects on the constrained-voucher
document, but
> that is easily fixed.
I would go for 'vchr' since voucher is 'vch' in RFC8366 and 'r' can then
mean request. but then the voucher extension is 'vcj'. So, just a
personal preference for 'vchr'; else ok for this e-mail
Tom Petch
> > Further, this I-D defines import ietf-voucher { prefix v; i.e.
does not
> > use the prefix defined in RFC8366. This contradicts a MUST in
RFC8407.
>
> okay, got it, fixed it.
>
> > There is a discrepancy between the e-mail addresses of the
authors of
> > the YANG module and of the I-D, for
> > Author: Kent Watsen Author:
>
> Fixed.
>
> > Toerless Eckert I note that the e-mail addresses for the YANG
module
> > are the same as those for the YANG module in RFC8366; I do not
know
> > which are correct.
>
> People moved to different companies since publication :-)
>
> > contact "WG Web: <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/anima/> should be
https:
> > and usually points to datatracker.ietf.org not tools
>
> Fixed.
>
> --
> Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@xxxxxxxxxxxx>, Sandelman Software Works
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