Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-lsp-control-request-08

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Hi Dhruv,

Yes, that looks good to me, I agree with the changes and I'm fine with letting the RFC editor figure the last nit out. Thanks!

Francesca

On 06/09/2019, 11:46, "Dhruv Dhody" <dhruv.ietf@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

    Hi Francesca,
    
    Thanks for your review. Few thoughts...
    
    On Mon, Aug 26, 2019 at 5:44 PM Francesca Palombini via Datatracker
    <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
    >
    > Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
    > Review result: Ready with Issues
    >
    > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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    > Document: draft-ietf-pce-lsp-control-request-08
    > Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
    > Review Date: 2019-08-26
    > IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28
    > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
    >
    > Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication, but has minor issues/open
    > points that should be fixed before publication.
    >
    > Major issues: N/A
    >
    > Minor issues / questions:
    >
    > * Section 3: At the end of season 3, you indicate that this new flag has no
    > meaning in PCRpt and PCInitiate messages. RFC8231 defines that the SRP Object
    > MAY be carried in PCErr as well, shouldn't there be such requirements (MUST be
    > set to 0, MUST be ignored on reception) for PCErr?
    >
    
    I agree. I suggest to make this generic, something like - "The C Flag
    has no meaning in other PCEP messages that carry SRP object and the
    flag MUST be set to 0 on transmission and MUST be ignored on receipt."
    
    > * In the following text (Section 4): "The PCE SHOULD NOT
    >    send control request for LSP which is already delegated to the PCE,
    >    i.e. if the D Flag is set in the PCUpd message, then C Flag SHOULD
    >    NOT be set." Why is there a SHOULD NOT instead of MUST NOT? In which
    >    situation could it be acceptable or useful to request control for a
    >    delegated LSP?
    >
    
    It wont be useful, but if received it would be silently ignored. It
    does not rise up to a high level of error and I suspect that is why
    authors used SHOULD.
    
    > Nits/editorial comments:
    >
    
    Thanks for these, just one comment ...
    
    > * Terminology should also include a sentence about the reader being familiar
    > with at least RFC8231.
    >
    > * Terminology could also include what SRP stand for.
    >
    > * Section 3. When introducing SRP, it would have been helpful to the reader to
    > reference section 7.2 of RFC8231.
    >
    > * Section 3. "PCE sets the C Flag to 1 to indicate that, it wishes" -- remove
    > ","
    >
    > * Section 3. "MUST be ignored on receipt" -- "MUST be ignored on reception"
    >
    
    I have noticed 'on receipt' in many of our documents. We should leave
    this one for the RFC-EDITOR maybe...
    
    > * Section 4. When introducing the D flag, it would have been helpful to the
    > reader to reference section 7.3 of RFC8231.
    >
    > * Section 4. "Note that, the PCUpd message with C Flag set is received" --
    > "Note that, if the PCUpd message with C Flag set is received"
    >
    > (Please keep my address in the To: field if you want to make sure I see any
    > response to this thread)
    >
    > Thanks,
    > Francesca
    >
    
    Thanks again for your review.
    
    Regards,
    Dhruv
    





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