Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-04 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2019-08-15 IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-27 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: Ready with Nits Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: None Nits: Section 3.2.3: The lettered paragraphs at the top of the section begin with lower case letters, but the lettered paragraphs at the top of the section begin with upper case letters. Please be consistent. Section 3.2.3: s/time after which the adjacency will now expire/ /time after which the adjacency will expire/ Section 3.2.3 says: ... It is therefore useful to signal a planned restart (if the forwarding plane on the restarting router is maintained) so that ... I suggest: ... If the forwarding plane on the restarting router is maintained, it is useful to signal a planned restart so that ...
