Thanks, Joel, for taking the time to review this!
Barry
On Thu, Aug 8, 2019 at 10:23 PM Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-klensin-idna-unicode-review-02
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2019-08-08
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-30
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: THis document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
This reviewer found the document quite readable and clear about what it was
doing (with one minor issue noted below.) The reviewer does not have the
background to evaluate whether the technical substance is correct or
incorrect, and leaves that to the community review. The document is quite
persuasive.
Major issues: N/A
Minor issues:
I would like to see a little more explicit text in section 3.2. It was not
until I reached the IANA considerations (section 8) that I realized that
section 3.2 intended to mandate that the IESG create and where applicable
use a broad review team for the new code point review. I think a sentence
or so along the lines of "Creation of this team when needed is a new
responsibility placed on the IESG by this document." would have helped.
Nits/editorial comments: N/A
