Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out-?? Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review Date: 2019-06-14 IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-25 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The draft updates the BGP Monitoring Protocol BMP by adding access to the Adj-RIB-Out RIBs. There are some unclear areas that need authors to clarify. Major issues: Minor issues: Section 1 last paragraph: It is not clear if BMP sender send to multiple BMP receivers or just to one "BMP receiver". The first part of the sentence says "..send to a BMP receivers", the second part says ".. advertise to BGP peers, .." Suggest to make it consistent, such as sending to multiple, or just one. ".. to send to BMP receivers what it advertises.." Does a BMP sender also send out Adj-RIB-In? it is not clear to. Section 6 first sentence: just curious which BMP messages are NOT applicable to Adj-RIB-In or Adj-RIB-out? If it is specified in other documents, please add a reference. Nits/editorial comments: Thank you. Linda Dunbar
