--On Wednesday, May 15, 2019 11:23 -0400 David Noveck <davenoveck@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: >>> - Delete Section 4. > >> (Section 4 is "Implications for Other Documents") > > Oops. What I intended was to delete the to-Do section, which > is section 5. Sorry about that. While my comments suggest that Section 5 should be expanded into a discussion of loose ends and overlapping problems, the two sections are hugely different. Thanks. john
