Thanks Stewart. I entered a No Objection ballot and referred to your review. Alissa > On Apr 6, 2019, at 5:26 AM, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct-03 > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2019-04-06 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-04-08 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > Apart from one figure that was difficult to understand and some trivial nits > this is well written and is ready for publication. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: > > __________ __________ __________ > | | | | | | > ---->| 2.05 |---->| 2.05 / |---->| 4.xx / | > | Pending | | 2.03 | | 5.xx | > |__________| |__________| |__________| > ^ \ \ ^ \ ^ > \__/ \ \___/ / > \_______________________/ > > Figure 2: Sequence of Notifications: > SB> Not my specialty, but I don't see what message gets sent > SB> to who in the above and RFC7641 has no similar diagram. > > Nits/editorial comments: > accompanying it. In such a case, the sequence in which these occur > may not be relevant to the application. This specification allows to > SB> typo - word missing > indicate that an optional part is not present by substituting a null > value for the representation of the part. > > ========== > > The collection is encoded as a CBOR [RFC7049] array with an even > SB> CBOR needs expanding on first use (it is not on the well known list) > number of elements. > > ========== > > Person & email address to contact for further information: > iesg&ietf.org > SB> Shouldn't that be iesg@xxxxxxxx? > > ========== > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
