David, thanks for your review. Adrian, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Mar 12, 2019, at 7:13 PM, Adrian Farrel <adrian@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Thanks David, > > Subject experts we have. Your review of readability etc. was most welcome. > > Adrian > > -----Original Message----- > From: David Schinazi via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> > Sent: 12 March 2019 22:20 > To: gen-art@xxxxxxxx > Cc: pce@xxxxxxxx; ietf@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp.all@xxxxxxxx > Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12 > > Reviewer: David Schinazi > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12 > Reviewer: David Schinazi > Review Date: 2019-03-12 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-20 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: I am not knowledgeable in this domain so this review > only focused on style. Document reads nicely, is well ordered > and defines its terminology clearly. Looks great from a form perspective. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: None > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
