Reviewer: Tianran Zhou Review result: Has Issues I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document reviewed: draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08 Intended Status: Standards Track Summary: In general, this document is clear to me. I did not see any special operational or network management related issue. It's almost ready to be published. There are some issues and nits. Issues: The normative and informative reference in this draft are not clear to me. I think that [RFC8017](Informational) and [RFC8174](BCP) should not be normative reference. And why some standard tack RFC are listed in informative reference? Editorial: line 102: redundand -> redundant line 126,129: Deterministric -> Deterministic line 314: algorithsm -> algorithms line 378: subtitutions -> substitutions line 763,777: Determinstic -> Deterministic
