Le 04/03/2019 à 12:24, Pascal Thubert a écrit :
Reviewer: Pascal Thubert
Review result: Not Ready
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IP packets MUST be transmitted over 802.11-OCB media as QoS Data
frames whose format is specified in IEEE Std 802.11.
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Please add link to the reference
I added like below.
But beware that:
- it is the third time we refer to this document in the text.
- the document behind the URL is behind a paywall, even though the
description of the document is free of access.
NEW:
IP packets MUST be transmitted over 802.11-OCB media as QoS Data
frames whose format is specified in IEEE 802.11(TM) -2016
[IEEE-802.11-2016].
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[IEEE-802.11-2016]
"IEEE Standard 802.11-2016 - IEEE Standard for Information
Technology - Telecommunications and information exchange
between systems Local and metropolitan area networks -
Specific requirements - Part 11: Wireless LAN Medium
Access Control (MAC) and Physical Layer (PHY)
Specifications. Status - Active Standard. Description
retrieved freely on September 12th, 2017, at URL
https://standards.ieee.org/findstds/
standard/802.11-2016.html".
Alex
