Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-rmcat-eval-test-09 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2019-03-06 IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-11 IESG Telechat date: 2019-03-07 Summary: I remain concerned as to whether the advice regarding the use of these tests on or in proximity to production networks is strict enough, Major issues: Although the security section has been revised since my review of -08, I remain concerned as to whether the advice against testing of production networks is strict enough. I know that performance testing on production networks has given problems in the past, and this is really no different. The OPS and SEC ADs should satisfy themselves as to whether the new text is adequate in this regards. Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: ** There are 6 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one being 4 characters in excess of 72. ** The document seems to lack a both a reference to RFC 2119 and the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords. RFC 2119 keyword, line 458: '...didate proposals MAY show the effectiv...'
