Hi Elwyn, Thanks for further review and confirming the acceptance of the most of the edits while pointing out a few items to be corrected. I will update those during the IESG review. Best regards, Young -----Original Message----- From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:elwynd@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] Sent: Monday, January 28, 2019 2:13 PM To: gen-art@xxxxxxxx Cc: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext.all@xxxxxxxx; pce@xxxxxxxx; ietf@xxxxxxxx Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-117 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2019-01-28 IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-27 IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07 Summary: Ready. There are a couple of trivial nits remaining. Otherwise, thanks very much for addressing my last call comments. Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: S3: The expansion of 3R needs to be at first occurrence. This is one paragraph earlier than the added expansion in v11. S3, next to last para: need to expand FEC. S4.1, para 5: s/to the allocation/used for the allocation/
