Thanks. I will take care of your comments as part of the next revision. -----Original Message----- From: Dan Romascanu [mailto:dromasca@xxxxxxxxx] Sent: Tuesday, December 11, 2018 15:29 To: gen-art@xxxxxxxx Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-spf-uloop-pb-statement.all@xxxxxxxx; ietf@xxxxxxxx; rtgwg@xxxxxxxx; dromasca@xxxxxxxxx Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-spf-uloop-pb-statement-08 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-spf-uloop-pb-statement-08 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 2018-12-11 IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-18 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready This document analyzes the impact of using non-standardized IGP Link State implementations resulting in non-consistent tuning of parameters in the network and increased possibility of creating micro-loops. It can be viewed as a problem statement for standardized solutions like RFC 8405. The document is short and clear for implementers and operators familiar with networks running this class of protocols. Diagrams and table help in reading and understanding the material. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: 1. In the introduction: > For non standardized timers, implementations are free to implement it in any way. It is not obvious what 'it' means. I guess it's about different values of timers resulting in the possibility of micro-loops creation, but it would be better to clarify. 2. It would be useful to provide short explanations that make the figures more clear. In fig. 1 - what do the nodes represent (routers implementing the protocols), in fig. 2, and 3 - the abbreviations on the y axis _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
