Reviewer: Jürgen Schönwälder
Review result: Has Nits
Thanks for a concise and well written document. I have not run tools
to validate the XSD and the XML artefacts but the definitions all look
reasonable.
Comment:
- What does the following mean in the definition of e164StringType?
<attribute name="x" type="token" />
It is indeed the intention to use "x"? What is the reason for having
e164Type, why not use e164StringType?
Nits:
- What are "Organization transform commands"? This phrase appears
several times in 3.4 an it seems this refers to what section 4.2
describes later on. Well, if you read the document sequentially,
things are a bit confusing. Perhaps define upfront what transform
commands are? It might also be that EPP people are used to
"transform commands" and this just shows my lack of familiarity with
EPP.
- s/ement/element/
- s/Zero of more <org:status> element/Zero of more <org:status> elements/
