Thanks for addressing my comments. Sheng > -----Original Message----- > From: Peter Psenak [mailto:ppsenak@xxxxxxxxx] > Sent: Wednesday, October 10, 2018 10:24 PM > To: Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@xxxxxxxxxx>; ops-dir@xxxxxxxx > Cc: lsr@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id.all@xxxxxxxx; ietf@xxxxxxxx > Subject: Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06 > > Hi Sheng, > > posted a new version that addresses your comments. > > thanks, > Peter > > On 10/10/18 05:47 , Sheng Jiang wrote: > > Reviewer: Sheng Jiang > > Review result: Has Nits > > > > Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors, > > > > I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's > > ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the > > IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the > > operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not > > addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG > > review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like > any other last call comments. > > > > This standard track document defines a new option Local Interface > > Identifier in OSPF Hello and Database Description (DD) packets as an > > extensions to OSPF link-local signalling. This document is short and > > well written. It is READY with a couple of Nits, which should be easily fixed. > > > > Major issue: no. > > > > Minor issue: no. > > > > Nits: > > > > Unused Reference: 'RFC8379'. There is no relevant text. Either some > > text should be added or this reference should be deleted. > > > > In the IANA section, "18 - Local Interface Identifier TLV". Normally > > the value that is actually assigned should be left to IANA. Here, it > > should be TBD as a draft. > > > > Regards, > > > > Sheng > > > > . > >
