Joel,
On 2018-10-12 15:17, Joel Halpern wrote:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> The reference [IDevID] still appears to me to be a normative reference.
It is normative in draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra, where it really
matters. Seems like a marginal point in an Informational document, but of course
we'll follow the IESG's guidance.
> In 3.3.3, the new parenthetical e.g. (replacing the wording "For example",
> seems to have no closing parenthesis.
Ack.
Thanks
Brian
