Hi Roni, I’ll add that for the next version. Thanks, Ian > On 9. Oct 2018, at 09:02, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-?? > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date: 2018-10-08 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > 1. In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I > noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network > management. why not add restconf to introduction? > > > _______________________________________________ > Softwires mailing list > Softwires@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
