> On Sep 25, 2018, at 12:32 PM, Joe Clarke <jclarke@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Joe Clarke > Review result: Has Nits > > I have been assigned to review this document on behalf of the ops directorate. > This document defines a YANG model for configuring access control lists (ACLs) > as well as other modules for protocol data types and ether types. Related to > those, it requests IANA actions to register the modules. > > This document is ready, and I only found a few nits in it. > > Section 1: > > s/criteria allows/criteria allow/ as criteria is plural > > s/criteria is/criteria are/ Ok. > > === > > Section 3: > > s/criteria allows/criteria allows/ You mean s/criteria allows/criteria allow/ I see one more (in Section 4.2) that I will correct also. > > === > > Section 7: > > s/together to created a/together to create a/ Ok. > > === > > Section A.3: > > Why is this module not yang-version 1.1 like the other two? Ok. > > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
