Some minor, mostly administrative, details - The note to the RFC Editor asking them to replace XXXX is good. I suggest another asking them to update the dates in the file and revision clauses of the YANG module with the date of publication.. - Copyright is 2017 - the YANG module has six imports but no reference to where they can be found. I suggest adding a reference clause to each import, as in e.g. draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model, and, since the reference clause cannot contain a XML style reference to the Reference section of the I-D, a further mention of these I-D/RFC in the body of the I-D, again as in e.g. draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model - RFC7223 now has a bis version which I think you should use as it is the NMDA version - this might affect your augments, I have not delved into that yet. - RFC5246 is being obsoleted and ... perhaps not:-) - RFC 6536 is being revised and will soon be in IETF Last Call Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "The IESG" <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> Sent: Monday, February 12, 2018 2:28 PM > > The IESG has received a request from the Softwires WG (softwire) to consider > the following document: - 'A YANG Data Module for Dual-Stack Lite (DS-Lite)' > <draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-14.txt> as Proposed Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2018-02-26. Exceptionally, comments may be > sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of > the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > This document defines a YANG module for the DS-Lite Address Family > Transition Router (AFTR) and Basic Bridging BroadBand (B4) elements. > > Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor) > > Please update these statements with the RFC number to be assigned to > this document: > > o "This version of this YANG module is part of RFC XXXX;" > > o "RFC XXXX: A YANG Data Module for Dual-Stack Lite (DS-Lite)"; > > o "reference: RFC XXXX" > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang/ > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang/ballot/ > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > The document contains these normative downward references. > See RFC 3967 for additional information: > draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang: A YANG Module for Network Address Translation (NAT) (None - IETF stream) > > >
