RE: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48

[Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Linda,

 

Thank you for the review! I will fix the editorial nit in the next version of the document.

 

Regards,

 

Christer

 

From: Linda Dunbar [mailto:linda.dunbar@xxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: 12 February 2018 20:43
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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48

 

 

 

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar

Review result: Ready with Nits

 

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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48

 

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar

Review Date: 2018-02-12

IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-?

IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-14

 

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

 

Major issues: none

 

Minor issues: None

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

 

Typo: Abstract 3rd paragraph: "RTP header extension that van..."

Do you mean "RTP header extension that can..."?

 

Linda Dunbar