Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ice-trickle-16

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-ice-trickle-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-02-11
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22
IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In appendix B third paragraph "When performing full trickle, a full ICE
implementation could conveying the initial ICE description or response thereto
..."  change to "convey"





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