---- Original Message ----- From: "Juergen Schoenwaelder" <j.schoenwaelder@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Thursday, January 11, 2018 12:58 PM > On Thu, Jan 11, 2018 at 12:32:29PM -0000, tom p. wrote: > > ----- Original Message ----- > > From: "Juergen Schoenwaelder" <j.schoenwaelder@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > > Sent: Wednesday, January 10, 2018 4:36 PM > > > > > Right. Lets see there "two" is used: > > > > > > - 1st paragraph in 2. Objectives: I think the text is clear since it > > > talks about a concrete example of a configured value and an > > > operationally used value. > > > > > > - 2nd paragraph in 2. Objectives: This text talks about two separate > > > branches in the old models, this should be fine. > > > > > > - 4th paragraph in 2. Objectives: I think this is potentially > > > causing the confusion. It says: > > > > > > With the revised architectural model of datastores defined in this > > > document, the data objects are defined only once in the YANG > > schema > > > but independent instantiations can appear in two different > > > datastores, one for configured values and one for operational > > state > > > values. > > > > > > Perhaps a better wording would be this: > > > > > > With the revised architectural model of datastores defined in this > > > document, the data objects are defined only once in the YANG > > > schema but independent instantiations can appear in different > > > datastores, e.g., for a configured value and one for an > > > operationally used value. > > > > > > This e.g. then kind of continues the example the section started > > > with. Would this change have avoided the question? > > > > Juergen > > > > Yes, I would find that clearer. Perhaps even better > > > > OLD > > e.g., for a configured value and one for an > > operationally used value. > > NEW > > e.g., one for a configured value and one (another?) for an > > operationally used value. > > > > I would say 'one' and 'another' but 'one' and 'one' would be clear > > enough. > > > > I now have this: > > With the revised architectural model of datastores defined in this > document, the data objects are defined only once in the YANG schema > but independent instantiations can appear in different datastores, > e.g., one for a configured value and another for an operationally used > value. > > OK? OK Tom Petch > /js > > -- > Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH > Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany > Fax: +49 421 200 3103 <http://www.jacobs-university.de/>