Hi Acee, please see inline. On Mon, 2018-01-08 at 19:28 +0000, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote: > Hi Lada, > > Apologies for the delay. We somewhat got hung up on 4 and 6. See inline. > > On 12/6/17, 6:26 AM, "Ladislav Lhotka" <lhotka@xxxxxx> wrote: > > > Reviewer: Ladislav Lhotka > > Review result: Ready with Issues ... > > > > 3. Maybe the draft could mention that implementations should supply a > > default routing domain as a system-controlled resource. > > Isn’t this more of an RFC8022BIS statement? I guess we could state this as > an assumption. Probably, but it is not a YANG issue, so I'd leave it to you routing folks to decide. > > > > 4. In "when" expressions, the module uses literal strings for > > identities. This is known to be problematic, the XPath functions > > derived-from() or derived-from-or-self() should be used instead. > > Why is this problematic? Is it because the types can be extended? That's one reason: derived identities should often also satisfy the constraint. But the more serious problem is that things like when "../../../../../../../rt:type = 'ospf:ospfv3'" rely on plain string comparison that depends od the actual prefix used for the "rt:type" value. For one, according to RFC 7951 the JSON encoding of this value would be "ietf-ospf:ospfv3" so the above expression is always false. > > > > 6. The types of LSA headers are modelled as integers. While OSPF gurus > > probably know these numbers by heart, it is not very > > reader-frienly. So at least some references to documents defining > > these numbers should be provided, but my suggestion is to consider > > implementing them with identities. It seems it might also be useful > > to define some "abstract" identities for these types. For example, > > if "opaque-lsa" is defined, then the definition of container > > "opaque" could simply use > > > > when "derived-from(../../header/type, 'ospf:opaque-lsa')"; > > > > instead of > > > > when "../../header/type = 9 or " > > + "../../header/type = 10 or " > > + "../../header/type = 11"; > > I guess I don’t see the identities as always being better. We will > consider this one. In what situations could the numbers be better? ... Thanks, Lada -- Ladislav Lhotka Head, CZ.NIC Labs PGP Key ID: 0xB8F92B08A9F76C67