Hi,
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Jörg
Summary:
This draft is essentially ready. I do not see any transport-specific
issues.
Comments:
It seems that in a few places, the document does not use RFC 2119
keywords where they could/should be used. For example, in the
introduction paragraph to section 4 and in section 5.2 (right after the
enumeration). Not sure if the non-use was intentional or an oversight.
Nit:
p.3: This is a standards track document, so the language could be
stronger.
OLD:
This document proposes an extension to relax the fixed UDP source
NEW:
This document defines an extension to relax the fixed UDP source