Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-framework-08

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Reviewer: Carlos Martinez
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Overall I've found this document to be READY. I do believe that some parts'
readability could be improved however, particularly Section 5. This section
describes some principles a potential implementation of the spec should follow
but provides little or no justification for them. I believe additional text
could help.

Thank you to the authors for their great work!

Carlos





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