On 16/10/17 08:13, Roni Even wrote:
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Nits/editorial comments:
1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this
document " section 2. The document is missing a table of content 3. In the
acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole text heavily from a
previous document doing
similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also
stole? I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a
similar document by Russ Housely"
s/Housely/Housley/
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Rob Stradling
Senior Research & Development Scientist
COMODO - Creating Trust Online