Reviewer: Matthew Miller Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-grow-bgp-gshut-11 Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller Review Date: 2017-10-09 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-11 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is ready to be published as an Informational document, but there is one issue that I think clarification would help. Major issues: NONE Minor issues: In Section 4. "EBGP graceful shutdown procedure", it states that 0 can used in all cases except where the AS already has a special meaning for 0. It seems to me more ought to be said, but I admit I'm not well-versed on (I) BGP and might be seeing dragons where only windmills are present. Nits/editorial comments: * I suggest using RFC 8174 and its terminology boiler plate to help disambiguate "may" versus "MAY". * A number of acronyms are used throughout without being spelled out (e.g., RR, IBGP, FIB, EBGP, AS), but some (e.g., ASBR) are spelled out. I would find it helpful to be consistent here, preferably by spelling them out on first use. * In Section 1. "Introduction", second paragraph, the word "operation" seems to be missing from the first sentence: """ This document discusses operational procedures to be applied in order to reduce or eliminate loss of packets during a maintenance. """ * Throughout the Appendices, there are some inconsistent uses of some terms, especially when compared to the rest of the document: - "Local-Pref" versus "LOCAL_PREF" - "nexhop" versus "NEXT_HOP" * In Appendix A. "Alternative techniques with limited applicability", the phrase "describe them" ought to be "describes them".