Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2017-09-27 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-04 IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-12 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. Abbreviation like RIB and FIB are not expanded 2. In section 9.1 "more simple" should be "simpler" 3. In section 9.1 " does not enough provide enough bandwidth" to " does not provide enough bandwidth" 4. In section 9.2 "a mechanism where the convergence of the network upon a topology change is made ordered to prevent transient forwarding loops" is difficult to read maybe "a mechanism where the convergence of the network upon a topology change is ordered in order to prevent transient forwarding loops"