Hi Michael,
Thanks for the review; I've uploaded a -06 now which updates the abstract, adds the reference to RFC 6891 and clarifies the language around the purpose of the EDNS0 options.regards,
Ted
On Thu, Feb 16, 2017 at 10:18 AM, <"Michael Tüxen <tuexen@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>"@ietfa.amsl.com> wrote:
Reviewer: Michael Tüxen
Review result: Ready with Nits
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This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
should be
fixed before publication.
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* The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC7624]), which it
shouldn't.
* Unused Reference: 'RFC4301'
The discussion of RFC 7871 in section 4 could be improved to allow
readers
not knowing the EDNS0 option to get the point. Either provide an
abstract
description or refer to RFC 6891.