Hi,
I will leave only the items that needed my response
7. In section 3.4 “If the client decided to use the prefix provided
by the server despite being longer than the prefix-length hint” yet I
did not see in section 3.2 that the server can provide a longer
prefix.
[Tianxiang] This was mentioned in the last sentence of section 3.2:
"If the requested prefix is not available in the server's prefix pool, and the client also included a prefix-length hint in the same IA_PD option, then the server SHOULD try to provide a prefix matching the prefix-length value, or the prefix with the shortest length possible which is closest to the prefix-length hint value."
[Roni Even] I understood from 3.2 that it should provide a shorter length prefix closer to the request maybe “or the prefix with the closest possible length to the prefix-length hint value”
[Tianxiang2] The original sentence was a bit confusing, perhaps we could change it like this:
OLD: "If the requested prefix is not available in the server's prefix pool, and the client also included a prefix-length hint in the same IA_PD option, then the server SHOULD try to provide a prefix matching the prefix-length value, or the prefix with the shortest length possible which is closest to the prefix-length hint value."
NEW:"If the requested prefix is not available in the server's prefix pool, and the client also included a prefix-length hint in the same IA_PD option, then the server SHOULD provide a prefix matching the prefix-length hint, or a prefix which is length is shorter and as close as possible to the prefix-length hint. If the server could not provide a prefix which length is shorter or equal to the prefix-length hint, the server SHOULD provide the prefix which length is longer and as close as possible to the prefix-length hint."
[Roni Even] I have no problem with this text since it will also work with the rest of the document but is it what was really meant
Also a nit
“or a prefix which is length is shorter and as close as possible to the prefix-length hint. If the server could not provide a prefix which length is shorter or equal to the prefix-length hint, the server SHOULD provide the prefix which length is longer and as close as possible to the prefix-length hint”
to
“or a prefix whose length is shorter and as close as possible to the prefix-length hint. If the server could not provide a prefix with a shorter or equal length to the prefix-length hint, the server SHOULD provide a prefix whose length is longer and as close as possible to the prefix-length hint”
Nits/editorial comments: