Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Has Nits Hi, QA review for "TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links) over IP" I-D: Document: draft-ietf-trill-over-ip-08.txt Reviewer: Ines Robles Review Date: December 28, 2016 Intended Status: Proposed Standard Summary: I believe the draft is technically good. I have some minor comments. Comments: Major Issues: I have no “Major” issues with this I-D. Minor Issues and Nits: Section 1: Introduction - I would add a reference to [draft-ietf-6man-rfc2460bis-08] when IPv6 is mentioned. Section 2: Terminology - In RBridge definition, I would add a reference to [RFC6325] - In VNI definition, I would extend VXLAN - "...In Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN) [RFC7348]..." Section 3: Use Cases for TRILL over IP The text of the uses cases is clear. However, I think it would be nice to add a graph for each use case like: https://www.ietf.org/proceedings/82/slides/trill-13.pdf (Slide 4 and 5) Section 4.5: TRILL Over IP IS-IS SubNetwork Point of Attachment I think it would be nice to add in the text the meaning of "111111" depicted in the figure. Section 8.1: Congestion Considerations I would expand ECMP in the 3rd paragraph. Section 9.2.3.2 I think it would be nice to add a reference to RFC 7172 when Inner.FGL is mentioned. Section 11.1: Port Assignments I would add the registry for this request - "Service Name and Transport Protocol Port Number Registry" [https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers/service-names-port-numbers.xhtml] Thank you very much, Ines.