Thank you, Ilari! The changes look good and thanks for getting them posted. Kathleen On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 9:43 AM, Ilari Liusvaara <ilariliusvaara@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 09:23:01AM -0400, Kathleen Moriarty wrote: >> Ilari, >> >> Thanks for your response. Could you propose text to address the last question? >> >> Thanks, >> Kathleen >> >> On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 9:20 AM, Ilari Liusvaara >> <ilariliusvaara@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> > On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 02:21:27PM +0200, Jari Arkko wrote: >> >> Thanks for your review, Roni! >> >> >> >> Authors, did you observe the editorial suggestions? >> > >> > Did the changes to Editor's Copy. >> > >> > The comment about corner-cases I just deleted[1]. >> > > > I'm not quite sure what question you mean. The changes due to editorial > suggestions? > > > Anyway, I grabbed the diff of the changes since -05: > ----------------------------------------------------------------------- > diff --git a/draft-liusvaara-jose-cfrg-curves.xml b/draft-liusvaara-jose-cfrg-curves.xml > index a0dcf22..c737ac0 100644 > --- a/draft-liusvaara-jose-cfrg-curves.xml > +++ b/draft-liusvaara-jose-cfrg-curves.xml > @@ -49,17 +49,16 @@ > Diffie-Hellman algorithms ("X25519" and "X448"; <xref target="RFC7748"/>) and > signature algorithms ("Ed25519" and "Ed448"; > <xref target="I-D.irtf-cfrg-eddsa"/>) for asymmetric key cryptography. This document > - defines how those algorithms are to be used in JOSE in interoperable manner.</t> > + defines how to use those algorithms in JOSE in interoperable manner.</t> > > - <t>This document defines the conventions to be used in the context of > + <t>This document defines the conventions to use in the context of > <xref target="RFC7515" />, <xref target="RFC7516" />, and <xref target="RFC7517" />.</t> > > <t>While the CFRG also defined two pairs of isogenous elliptic curves that underlie these > algorithms, these curves are not directly exposed, as the algorithms laid on top are > - sufficient for the purposes of JOSE and are much easier to use. (Trying to apply ECDSA > - to those curves leads to nasty corner-cases and produces odd results.)</t> > + sufficient for the purposes of JOSE and are much easier to use.</t> > > - <t>All inputs to and outputs from the the ECDH and signature functions are defined to > + <t>All inputs to and outputs from the ECDH and signature functions are defined to > be octet strings, with the exception of outputs of verification functions, which are > booleans.</t> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > -Ilari -- Best regards, Kathleen