Donald, >> For cases of "[RFC5310] Based authentication" to "[RFC5310]-based >> authentication". Watch for one instance of "RFC 5310 Based" as well. >OK. >(Nit-Nit: I think in the nit above, the first word should be Four.) Ha! (I hadn't actually counted the number of cases. ) >> Page 12, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "These constructed addresses" >> to "A constructed address". >Humm. I don't really like your suggested change. How about I change it to "Such a constructed address ..." Fine by me. >> Page 21, Section 7, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: delete "processing >> of". Or change "processing" to "process". >Instead, change the immediately following "decapsulating" to "decapsulated". That works as well. Thanks for considering my suggestions. -Peter