On 30/03/2016 14:38, Pete Resnick wrote: > On 26 Mar 2016, at 15:28, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > >>> 6. Failure to Disclose >> >> This paragraph has been over-pruned; it now makes no sense: >> >>> In addition to any remedies the IESG may consider other actions. See >>> [RFC6701] for details. >> >> Do you mean: >> >> In addition to any remedies available outside the IETF, the IESG may >> consider other actions. See [RFC6701] for details. > > I think that's fine, but it needn't even refer to the IESG: > > In addition to any remedies available outside the IETF, actions may > be taken inside the IETF to address violations of IPR disclosure > policies; see [RFC6701] for details. > > 6701 points out that actions can be taken by chairs, ADs, the IESG, or the IETF as a whole. > > But I'm fine with either of the above. > >> I'm made a little nervous by the fact that RFC 6701 is Informational, >> and the text you have removed would give the IESG specific authority (by BCP) >> to impose penalties. So I think you have actually pruned too much. I would >> prefer that authority to be included, so maybe: > > > I strongly disagree. Quoting 6701: > > This document discusses these issues and provides a suite of > potential actions that can be taken within the IETF community in > cases related to patents. All of these sanctions are currently > available in IETF processes, and at least two instances of violation > of the IPR policy have been handled using some of the sanctions > listed. > > 6701 didn't change the sanctions available to the IETF, and this document doesn't and shouldn't either. So I disagree that this > should to be added to this document. Hmm. What that amounts to is indirect normative references to those sanctions. That's a little baroque for my taste. (Also, the normative references in 6701 include [BCP79], specified as the two documents that this draft obsoletes.) I see your point, though. Would you buy something like this? "...see [RFC6701] for details of the sanctions defined in various existing Best Current Practice documents". Brian > And on the specific suggestion: > >> In addition to any remedies available outside the IETF, the IESG >> may, when it in good faith concludes that such a violation has >> occurred, impose penalties including, but not limited to, suspending >> the posting/participation rights of the offending individual, >> suspending the posting/participation rights of other individuals >> employed by the same company as the offending individual, amending, >> withdrawing or superseding the relevant IETF Documents, and publicly >> announcing the facts surrounding such violation, including the name >> of the offending individual and his or her employer or sponsor. See >> [RFC6701] for details. > > Part of what I didn't like about the -06 version was that it, like you did in the above, only pointed out the most harsh > sanctions discussed in 6701, implying that those are the ones that should be used and not the others. A perfectly reasonable > sanction, in some cases, is: > > a. A private discussion between the working group chair or area > director and the individual to understand what went wrong and how > it can be prevented in the future. > > Please, leave it short, with either the short correction at the top from either Brian or myself. > > pr