I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-circuit-breaker-11 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2016–2-8 IETF LC End Date: 2016–2-9 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a BCP RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In section 6.3.2 the proposal is “For that reason, the draft suggests that a managed circuit breaker that shuts down a PW when it persistently fails to deliver acceptable TDM service is a useful means for addressing these congestion concerns.” I accepted to see some definition of “persistently fails” at least similar to section 6.3.1. Nits/editorial comments: |