On 05/01/2016 05:05, John C Klensin wrote: ... > In particular, don't say "By participating with the > IETF, you agree to follow IETF processes and policies" and then > identify only a few of them as if they were the complete list. I thought about trying to express that in my rewrite, but couldn't see an easy way to cover it. As I repeat from time to time, the hard way to cover it is http://www.ietf.org/about/process-docs.html . Good luck in trying to summarise that for the Note Well. Brian