I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-management-snapshot-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2015–6-14 IETF LC End Date: 2015–6-21 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: I was wondering about the value of C, the document references RFC 5497 which says A protocol using this time representation MUST define the value of C. Is there some recommendation here? Nits/editorial comments: In section 3.3 I am not sure what the following sentence in parentheses means: (up to and including mechanisms involving depleted uranium) |